Let take a look at two types of emails:
Hey,
Where is the prise you promised to send me on janaury 30! i've been waiting over two weeks!!!!!! aint it about time yoy all got your heads out of your'e
(deleted) and send me the
(deleted) thang????
What is the problem!!!! Cnat you do anything
(deleted) right>? Irf you dont send it right away im gonna call my atorney!
I am verry upset!!!!!!!!!
Suzy
or
(date)
ATTN:
(name of person)
(email address)
(name of company)
(address)
Dear Sir
(or Madam):
This communication is to inquire as to the status of the prize I was notified I had won on
(date) at
(time) in the
(name of contest) promotion. As of today's date I have not yet received the
(name of prize). I am very excited to have won a prize from your promotion and am really looking forward to receiving it!
Please refer below for a copy of your original email.
I appreciate you giving your time and attention to look into this matter at your earliest convenience. Please feel free to contact me if you have any further questions that will assist in this matter.
Very Sincerely,
(your name)
(email address)
(address)
(contact phone number)
Which one will get a timely reply? :scratch: :scratch: :scratch:
( lol ... that template is so good it should be saved! :crazytongue: :crazytongue: :crazytongue: )